Fiction

Titanium

My brain was full of different thoughts – “Why have I done this or what will be my punishment?” as I walk down the shattered corridor.  In sight I see two double doors.  I notice a blurred object outside as I amber through the first set of doors, then the second set.  I now knew that the inexplicable blurred object was a police car.  Concealing myself I hurry to the bike rack.  My teacher wanting to eagerly talk to the disorientated policeman.  Breathless, she explained everything that has just recently happened.  I quickly mount my bike as the teacher vigilantly points at me.  The policeman looks.

The teacher was struck with fear to see how far I had travelled.  “I have to get home quick!” as I reminded myself.  I persistently looked back to see if the policeman was coming.  As I noticed blurred objects moving.  I rode as fast as I could to get home.  I dismounted my bike inconsiderately and darted inside my disorganised house.  Feeling the comfort as I was at home.  I gazed at the TV in shock stating supernatural occurrence at local school.  Furious, I barged into my room and as quickly as I could I began to pack my essential belongings.  As loud as bomb exploding, the policemen knocked down the front door.  Panicked-stricken I started to go to the back door.  Startled, I summoned the keys and began to unlock the pale white door.

I ran out as quickly as I could as the policeman was not to be seen.  I looked.  Not one sound.  I began to stroll through the partly obliterated wood.  I heard the smooth river rippling in my ear, I heard my own breath in the air.  As I walked through, there were sticks snapping, leaves rustling and trees creaking, I was now in a tranquil place, no longer in the boisterous school.  It began to fall to the evening as I heard the wind whistling in my ear.  Suddenly, I saw a shine of the touch.  I ran.

Running, sprinting, bolting I ran as fast I could through the ominous forest.  I heard them shouting, ”STOP BOY!” they exclaimed.  Which I took no notice of.  And kept running until I was on the floor.  Unconscious as I thought, “I have been caught.” I said wearily not knowing what was happening.  I huddled in a ball.  A shine of explosion I blasted the bewildered police men.  Was this the end?

Adrianne H

4 thoughts on “Titanium

  • Some brilliant vocabulary in there, well done.

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  • Well done. I really like your power of 3 verbs as sentence openers.

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